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When some of my friends were home on college break, I took them to the Stock Yard Inn for prime rib and martinis.  Being the only one living at home and attending commuter college, I wanted to demonstrate some urban panache.  The only times I had been there previously was to drop off fares. I don’t remember much about the dinner.  On the way home, in my overconfidence in showing my mastery of city streets I made a wrong turn and we found ourselves in Chinatown.

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When friends were home on college break, I took them to the Stock Yard Inn for prime rib and martinis.  Being the only one living at home and attending commuter college, I wanted to demonstrate urban panache.  I had, of course, been there many times — to drop off fares. Don’t remember much of the dinner; but on the way home, with overconfident mastery of city streets  made a wrong turn and found ourselves in Chinatown.

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